Friday, February 15, 2008

The Poem

Okay, BB said he'd like to know what poem dash wrote--there is some debate on if this is a poem or not. I considedered a note. A very SWEET and special note. Dash & dash2 (aka Nicky) say it's a poem. Judge for yourself!

T

Love NEVER FAILS!!!

It was true when we met (Both times)
And true as we "fell in Love"
And when we "chose to Love"

It was true when your Granddad
said it under a tree in your front yard
And all the years between then then in now

Most of all its true in my heart!

Happy V-day
ILYMTTY...Y

Dash

For those of you who are reading this and don't know....my Grandad married us in an outdoor wedding at my folks home (Thus the granddad...under a tree statement)

5 comments:

Portland wawa said...

I am a little surprised Dash let you share that, but it was nice.

shakedust said...

The line between poem and prose is blurry, and I don't know where it really is.

Regardless, these words took heart.

Jadee said...

I think this is beautiful and priceless coming from your husband! :)

If you really want an answer to the debated question: poem or note. The easiest way to spot poetry vs. prose is the rhythm & meter:

Title
8-7-6
7-10-9
8

Therefore, being the English lover that I am, my vote is for beautiful, love-felt prose!

Achtung BB said...

I'd call it a poem. That was really sweet of Dash. He's a real Don Juan.

GoldenSunrise said...

Very sweet. It was nice of you guys to share.